In this assignment, I went to James' blog to see his entry on what it would be like in 2109. He basically wrote the same thing as I did, but his talked about "space travel and astronomy". He also mentioned that human beings would all have all ready advanced so far in technology, that the human race would have already found another "habitable planet" such as mars, for example. Constructively, I found this quite naive at because Canada and the United States have entered recession, and it would take a few years to recover. Also, Earth's fossil fuels and oil are running out, so even if we would be able to advance in technology, what substance would we use to power our spaceships or cars? Even with solar powered engines we would be stranded when it would become dark outside. Overall, I did like his entry because he used strong vocabulary and paragraphs in the right places and good details to support his facts and topic sentences.
Wednesday, January 21, 2009
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Hi Dillon,
You have a very interesting blog background, but I find the text a little difficult to read. Remember that this blog is mainly about Canadian History and though it can look great, make sure it's readable. Perhaps try different colours for your text.
Make sure to read and follow all instructions about the assignments. They're always there for your reference on my blog.
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